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Just a thought

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But I'm everything
I have been since.
I'm everything
I choose to be
even if some of those choices
are made by someone
other than me.

Choices that go in
and count in some way
to mold and make
who I am today.

And all the changes,
things to be, or
not to be
still make up,
this little thing
called me.
The first two lines of this poem jumped into my head after reading the first poem in this list [link] by :iconmahi-fish:

:iconmahi-fish:'s poem should be read first then the rest of mine follows as a response. It seems like a conversation to me.

yay for random thoughts.

Thoughts/critiques are very welcome. I think this one needs some punctuation help - I like to throw in random commas :)
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