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A mandarin sits solitary
on the scrubbed wood,
kitchen table.
Orange sweetness,
pale blue wood.
Bitter peel set,
piece by piece,
cradle like strips
in the sea.
Eight sections,
hopeful,
cling together
thinly veiled.
Broke, split
by the smallest finger,
orange juice
drips.
Carelessly eaten,
piece by piece.
Dreamer
gazes out,
sea's setting sun.
Breeze sneaks in
stray rays,
sweeping slender peels
to the floor.
on the scrubbed wood,
kitchen table.
Orange sweetness,
pale blue wood.
Bitter peel set,
piece by piece,
cradle like strips
in the sea.
Eight sections,
hopeful,
cling together
thinly veiled.
Broke, split
by the smallest finger,
orange juice
drips.
Carelessly eaten,
piece by piece.
Dreamer
gazes out,
sea's setting sun.
Breeze sneaks in
stray rays,
sweeping slender peels
to the floor.
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Still not entirely satisfied with this - so it's open to change, but I know if I don't go ahead and put it up I probably never will. Hope you enjoy 
Comments and critiques welcome as always.
Comments and critiques welcome as always. © 2009 - 2024 mooshu17
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I can say this much, it makes me want to eat an orange
The details and images are amazing. the last two stanzas are my favorite. the line "hopeful" in the third stanza seem to obstruct the flow, and kinda feels out of place.
The details and images are amazing. the last two stanzas are my favorite. the line "hopeful" in the third stanza seem to obstruct the flow, and kinda feels out of place.